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scathing bullets on angel dust
of stars blown to smithereens within your eyes
when you look at me
the galaxy obliterates itself
and i crumble to the floor, slip thru the cracks
your igneous eyes lit true upon my skirting form
delighted you grin like cats eyes on a mouse
a sheen that defies water and diamonds
and just as venomous
hooked addicted like a helpless junkie
savoring the psychotic string section
dizzying on grated nerves vivisected
i'd destroy the sky and all it's havens
to be submitted to your madman means
unable to control the scream of ecstatic voltage
feeling as though i’m standing in the middle
of hot high tide sped up on the 405
the moment you touch me
pulling me through these seas
laughing unstoppably in the confusion
ignited glittering insanity in your love

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glittering prize. i dunno. feel a little crazy right now. eheh.

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:iconcharlemaine:
*manic* I LIKE IT!!

would make a great song.

mad love, senseless devotion, armed with the impressive arsenal of a deranged terrorist. ahh, aint nothing like it..
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:iconrunnrabbitrunn:
i think i wrote it for the husband. i don't remember. thanks.
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:iconcharlemaine:
haha! good to see your relationship is alive & er, burning. keep it up babe
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:iconwisker:
I love the words and images you evoke. Kind of un natural and gritty. "savoring the psychotic string section
dizzying on grated nerves vivisected
i'd destroy the sky and all it's havens"
Great inspiring stuff. :]
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:iconrunnrabbitrunn:
heh thanks so much! :hug: cheers
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:icon76vinicius:
love the reference to vivisection...not used too often but an incredible picture. you do so well at packing immense pictures into few words. quite an inspiration.
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:iconrunnrabbitrunn:
thank you quite. i appreciate you reading! thanks
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:iconwindwater:
i love the first line ^_^
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:iconshadowwalker1013:
whoa, now that's a romance poem!
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