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if skies could open up
and drown me in cleansing rains
i swear he'd have never been the death of me
i swear i'd have never dared
wandered cross his zigzag path
and maybe i wouldn't be
sleepwalking after him
reliving rivers of curious wanton abandon
another lovesick minion
tied at the neck to his whims and desires
:iconrunnrabbitrunn:
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there's a silence surrounding me
i can't seem to think straight
i'll sit in the corner
no one can bother me
i think i should speak now
i can't seem to speak now
my words won't come out right
i feel like i'm drowning...

--'keep talking' pink floyd (gilmour)
:icontorturedremembrance:
Ahh, the end - how every story should have one, but it's still slightly depressing to know it's some-what over! Excellent writings, sister of mine. :heart:
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*ElegantFaith Nov 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I kept reading the first two lines over and over. They're calming and peaceful in a weak sort of way.
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:iconrunnrabbitrunn:
aye, i think so too. thanks.
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